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不積跬步無以至千里,不積小流無以成江河

(題目呢?)

Now we are often see(are,see都是動詞,一句話怎么能有2個謂語呢?)

不積跬步無以至千里,不積小流無以成江河

youngster s,注意單詞的準確性,正確用法是in public places=在公共場合).{本句正確的表達:N ow we often see young men (or youngsters)smooking in public places .本句值得表揚的是:用了who引導的定語啊,但是切記謂語、謂語啊} Mybe they think it is a interestion.(interestion有“興趣”的意思,但是它不常用做可數名詞,常用的是pleasure;它的動詞及用法是,interset+動詞ing形式,)。{本句可表達為:They think smooking is a pleasure;Mybe they think it is a pleasure }How stuip(silly也行)they are. It is reported that there have(此處可用there be 句型的,干嘛用have呢?)80 thousand(用法有問題,注意一下啊,“成千上萬的thousands of”)people dieing from smoking all over the world.

Smoking is not only result in many cancers,but also make the condition of youngster worse and worse.(此句何意??is本就是動詞后面還和result、make搭配著用,直接是錯誤的,“no t only…but also…的用法”迅速掌握,要不就別用,用錯了不得分??;){本句正確表達:Smoking not only result s in many cancers,but also ,,,,,,}Besides,in order to have enough

money to buy cigarettes,they can(Some youngers) take away others money,including their parent s. As we all know ,if the addicts has no cigarettes they will can not stand the pain.(As we all know , smookers can't go on with their work without cigarettets.眾所周知,抽煙的人沒有煙就不能繼續他們的工作。)So,please give up smoking,and you will have a new life!(Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give upsmoking as soon as possible. 抽煙是我們危險的敵人,請盡快戒煙吧!)

注意:請注意文中我能改過的地方,一定要引起重視啊。不

積跬步無以至千里,不積小流無以成江河。知識是一點一點積累的啊,

問題一:not only…but also…的用法

用于連接兩個表示并列關系的成分,著重強調后者,其意為“不僅……而且……”;其中的also有時可以省略。如:

She not only plays well, but also writes music.

她不僅很會演奏,而且還會作曲。

He not only writes his own plays, he also acts in them.

他不僅是自編劇本, 還飾演其中的角色。

Not only men but also women were chosen.

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